Wednesday 3 April 2019

Annie's challenge.

This week we had a challenger from May Rd school. We had to use 5 words. Which are: Wolf, Oxygen, Kumara, BFF, Experience. Here is my story.


As I walked through the forest, I saw a furious wolf Its jaw sticking out. It was laying down, running out of oxygen. I went over and tried to save It. A kumara rolled down the slope breaking apart as it hit the rocks below. As I saved the wolf, it stood up,




staring at me. It howled louder than anything I’ve heard. After that It became my BFF. It was the best experience of my life.
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7 comments:

  1. Anonymous29 April 2019 at 14:23

    Hello Matthew, My name is Zoe and I'm from room 24. My favorite part of your blog post was the image of the wolf with the back ground as the color. If you have time please check out my blog at http://odszoec.blogspot.com/ Blog Ya Later Zoe

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    1. Anonymous7 May 2019 at 18:58

      Thank you Zoe for commenting on my blog. I really liked that you like my image of the wolf. Because I liked it as well it was pretty cool to me that's why I chose the image. Thank you for checking out my blog. When I do have time I will check out your blog.

      Blog ya later.

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  2. Anonymous12 May 2019 at 14:24

    Hi Matthew my name is bruno and I'm in room 8, I liked you story But most of all i liked how you describe your wolf If you would like to see my blog it is https://odsbrunol.blogspot.com/.

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    1. Anonymous14 May 2019 at 19:20

      Hi Bruno. Thank you for commenting on my blog I liked how I described the wolf as well I thought it was cool to me. I will check out your blog sometime this week. Thank you for checking out my blog.

      Blog ya later.

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  3. Anonymous21 May 2019 at 15:36

    Hi Matthew. My name is Ava im from Owairaka School Room 22.
    I really liked your post. Can you explain how the wolf was losing oxygen?
    If you want to see my blog go to
    http://odsavap.blogspot.com/
    Blog you later!!!!

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  4. Anonymous4 June 2019 at 14:32

    Salut my name is Anjola from room 24 I really like your story about the wolf. That is a really like it because it shows kindness my dad was born in the year of the wolf what animal Chinese year were you born I was born in the year of the tiger.
    You should check out my blog
    https://odsanjola.blogspot.com/
    Blog you later

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    1. Anonymous5 June 2019 at 19:18

      Salut Anjola thank you for commenting on my blog i'm born in the year of the wolf as well I will check out your blog

      Blog Ya Later.

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